The use of the internet has its draw backs for seventy five percent of the Amercian people in today society.Fisrt of all ,our communication interacting with people has become less do to the services that the internet provides.Secondly, challenges the traditional eduacational methods ,schooling impose strict behaving and learning. Created web site for chatting and the use of google tool bar directory for anything you want or need.Third it has crippled from using our brain more, for instanct solving problem, old fashion way of doing researches, our behavior habits has change and less excising to stay healthier.
Finally, technology has become our daily form of communicating with each other through internet, email ,blog , facebook just to name a few. If it was taking away from us, alot of people would be lost. New generation do not know anything but modern technology .
I understand your argument. You should always reread your posts before final publication. Some of your thoughts are not as clearly stated as they could be. You did use your transition words well. They created a clear pattern of organizaiton.
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